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 Him - Deathnote Weilder (not quiiite finished)

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PostSubject: Him - Deathnote Weilder (not quiiite finished)   Tue May 04, 2010 1:29 pm

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Name: Hollis Lapree Edwards the third Aka: Him
Age: 23
Sex: Male
Apperance: has bleached white hair. a slightly visable scar going down his left eye . hes six feet three inches tall and one hundred ninety pounds. he has only six percent body fat and is muscular all over. it is obvious he is muscular but without taking his shirt off, he looks about as muscular as the average toned athlete. he wears sun glasses that have a light grey tint to them, allowing his eyes to still be seen. He usually takes them off when he is about to get serious or when in a serious situation
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DeathNote Apperance: Pure White
Shinigami apperance: Very tall skeleton with no skin to be seen. always wears a somewhat worn tuxedo from head to toe. his mouth has no teeth, but a long black stitching for a mouth instead. has small black wings on his back. they are barely visable.
Shinigami Name: Jakku (jack)
Shinigami Sex: Male
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Personality: Suffers from non-cognative, non negative schizophrenia. this basically means that his personality and some aspects of his thought has been damaged so that he is not paranoid, but still has trouble dicerning hallucination from reality. at times of great emotional stress or pleasure, he will experience these hallucinations, although they do not effect his mobility or thought process since these synapsis usually cause show what he desires the world around him to be. His condition among other things has caused him to build up a complete disregard for human life, although he likes to believe he cares for it more than anything else. because he is at the peak of human physical and mental fitness, he carries with him a great sense of superiority over everyone else, partially due to his mania. this only fuels his belief in survival of the fittest. he is very elegant however, and carries himself with dignity, although a slight twist of instability can be seen in his eyes. he enjoys the exuisite but is not at all afraid to get his hands dirty and is willing to act on anything he sees needs to be done. he is average when it comes to dealing with people, about as good as any other human, but is not a social butterfly at the time, most likely due to his recent release from incarceration. he usually has a blank half smile on his face with a slightly raised eyebrow.

History: Hollis was born and raised in an urban Texas city by his mother and father. he lived an average life and had a slightly above average intelligence. the one thing that was far above average , abnormal really was his physical condition. when he was seventeen, he was jumped by a group of four thugs, and he severly crippled all of them with his martial arts skill and physical prowess. he was a perfect athlete and excelled in all sports. when it was time for him to go to college though, he was strangly not able to recieve a scholorship from any college or university, despite him being the top athlete in the nation in football, basketball and track. so ,as most other kids in his position would do, hollis decides to join the military, specifically the marines , so that he could pay for college. as soon as he is enlisted, hollis is immediatly sent to a different branch of the marines. he is trained as an espionage and execution specialist (E.E.S), an unheard of sector of the military. after three years of training and in the feild missions, hollis was allowed to return home for a one month leave. when he returned to his hometown, no one seemed to know who he was. he tries to use his credit card but it does not work. he tries to use his social security number for various purchases, and yet it does not work. confused and highly concerned, but not frantic, hollis takes a bus to his old home to catch up with his parents and maybe talk about his current predicament. however, when he returns, it seemed as though his old house was gone, with only an open lot in its place. now frantic, hollis goes to city hall to ask for papers on his parents and his house. the lady at the front desk states that they had been killed in a car accident three years ago. he then begins to think and asks another question. "..what about hollis edwards..is he still around.." the woman cannot find any files on hollis, but happens to remember him playing in a state football game many years back. "oh yeah, hollis edwards..what a shame. he was murdered walking down the street about a year ago.."
"i see....thank you..". now at the end of the month, E.E.S agents come to pick up hollis tto take him back to the base to continue his service. however, hollis has already put two and two together and figured out that there must be some sort of conspiricy in the works. he didnt know what it was specifically or why it was happening, but hollis knew the only people that could pull something so surgical off would be the E.E.S. Hollis managed to kill two of the agents as he tried to escape anywhere he could but the one still alive quickly calls for back up and they swiftly capture him, knocking him out. hours later, hollis awakens in a laboratory stapped to an operating chair with bright lights blazing in his eyes. his commanding officer walks up to him with a serious look on his face. "hello agent edwards..havent seen you in a few weeks, you enjoy your vacation? good to have you back soldier". hollis questions forcefully what he is doing there, why all information on him has been erased and why he is believed to be dead. he threatens to leave the service. "oh edwards. dont you get it son? your here for life now boy. heck, even if you werent your still required to serve another year. i guess what im trying to say is. you belong to us now. Semper Fi, always faithful, loyal to the core, remember that?" a doctor enters the room "heh, well i guess i may as well go a head n tell you what you wanna know. since it wont matter in a little bit anyway.. we were the ones who erased your information. your social, your shot records, your credit card , everything that could possibly identify you in this world. we also killed your parents in that "car crash". and the thing about you "dying", that was one of our operatives hired specifically because they resembled you. we killed him. you see, weve been watchin you since your were ten. your special boy, one of a kind. the perfect physical specimen. thats wh we had to tell those universities not to give you money so we could get you here. and now that your here..we can begin operation H.I.M" a tall and skinny man in a white lab coat walks in the room and stops infront of hollis. "what we will be doing young man , is putting you through a series of examinations. after which, we will inject something called the human intellect modifyer into your temporal lobes followed by electro-shock therapy. basically it will unlock the potential of your brain. this will make you the perfect soldier mentally, pushing your comprehension skills to their limit and strengthening your knowledge intake, as well as removing any compassion for those weak or helpless. you will be a merciless killing machine under the control of E.E.S..well..either that or the syrum puts so much strain on your brain that you go mentaly insane. hopefully for us the latter does not happen. now..shall we begin.." following several hours of painful examination, the Human Intellect Modifyer is injected into hollis. immediately he is put into the feild , killing terrorists, politicians, whomever the general desired without mercy or hesitation. each time , the general would say "kill the weak, only the strong will survive". after almost a year, of

Supports: Publicly supports L. Secretly supports Kira. Internally supports only himself and his personal motives.
Likes: Strength. Power. Intelligence.
Dislikes: Any and all weak living beings. Any and all unintelligent living beings. (but not ignorant, or unaware, theres a difference)
Knowledge: 7/10
Conceptualization Power:10 /10
Will to act: 10/10
Motivation:5 /10
Social Skills: 5/10


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PostSubject: Re: Him - Deathnote Weilder (not quiiite finished)   Tue May 04, 2010 10:58 pm

Approvved for now, but make sure you get to edit & finish it all; Alos, make sure to keep this character active please. ^^

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PostSubject: Re: Him - Deathnote Weilder (not quiiite finished)   Wed May 05, 2010 8:31 pm

Ok, It looks great! Now all we need now is his age & your set to Rp!

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PostSubject: Re: Him - Deathnote Weilder (not quiiite finished)   Thu May 06, 2010 12:51 am

thanx^^ oh, but im not done yet, still gotta add more stuff 4 history . yoosh!!
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PostSubject: Re: Him - Deathnote Weilder (not quiiite finished)   Thu May 06, 2010 9:03 am

MMk, but just to remind you, I'm going to go ahead & set you up with a group & your name color. ^^
Tip: Use your imationation~~~

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PostSubject: Re: Him - Deathnote Weilder (not quiiite finished)   Thu May 06, 2010 11:18 am

k dats koo, jst lettin u kno^^. oh, n wats imationation?o.o
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PostSubject: Re: Him - Deathnote Weilder (not quiiite finished)   Thu May 06, 2010 4:30 pm

Imagination***
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PostSubject: Re: Him - Deathnote Weilder (not quiiite finished)   Fri May 07, 2010 12:54 am

lol,oh ok. i will!!^^
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PostSubject: Re: Him - Deathnote Weilder (not quiiite finished)   Sat May 08, 2010 7:20 am

If it's done, It's approved.
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PostSubject: Re: Him - Deathnote Weilder (not quiiite finished)   Sat May 08, 2010 9:25 am

((PM Me if It's not done completely yet))

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